Poetry

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Poetry
comes rolling out of my pursed lips
like smoke curling under the door.

Somebody’s going to get burnt soon.

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3 Responses to Poetry

  1. Ravishankar says:

    i liked the first line but not the second one…as then the whole of it is gives a feeling of prose…i think the second line should have better figures of speech…like burnt to the colour of smoke or brunt brown… or even using terms like roasted/toasted or coated to describe the effects of burning…

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