Old Mattress


Sneak Away

Sneak Away (Photo credit: Hindrik S)

She said your love is an old mattress.
It’s comfortably molded to me.
But it’s too heavy to carry.

So she took her pillow and walked away.

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5 thoughts on “Old Mattress

  1. Ravishankar June 25, 2013 at 08:34 Reply

    the pillow symbolises ….?nice one…

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    • IdeaSmith July 1, 2013 at 22:15 Reply

      @Ravishankar: Her self? Her heart? Her affections, loyalty, interest, participation in the relationship? It’s a metaphor that I’d like to define only loosely and leave up to the reader’s interpretation.

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  2. Dewang Vora June 25, 2013 at 14:36 Reply

    Good one …
    Another Gem of your thought

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    • IdeaSmith July 1, 2013 at 22:15 Reply

      @Dewang Vora: Thank you. I’m glad you liked it.

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