Adoration


If

You complete me.

is supposed to be romantic, what would you say if I told you that,

You started who I am, you define me.

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17 thoughts on “Adoration

  1. rambler June 20, 2007 at 22:48 Reply

    I would say, more romantic 🙂

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  2. Rachna June 21, 2007 at 00:42 Reply

    To begin with, I think,
    “You complete me”
    is the weakest thing a person can say, especially a woman. For it implies that I (whoever is saying it) is NOT a complete human being in themselves. It implies a lack, a certain void in my being, in my SELF.
    And unfortunately, being with a man does not complete that void. It only makes if bigger, emptier.
    Only YOU can make yourself WHOLE. Nobody else in the whole world can/ is capable of completing you. Your hollowness, your sorrow, your pain- comes from within you.
    I know. I’ve tried. Yet I am incomplete. I also thought this was romantic, Till I realized it is just weak. It shows my lack of being as a person, as a woman…
    Ooh I am still incomplete. But I know the inadequacy is mine..ti fill, to fulfill…

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  3. Rachna June 21, 2007 at 00:45 Reply

    Besides, to let somebody else “define” me, would mean even more weakness. By weakness I don’t mean a kind of soppy, simpering, silly woman- but one with less of a sense of self. Of self-worth.
    You have to define yourself yourself babe!!
    The other person may have no sense of grammar or punctuation! Oh Horror
    🙂

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  4. ricercar June 21, 2007 at 02:03 Reply

    the sweetest line … congrats 😀

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  5. perspective inc June 21, 2007 at 05:52 Reply

    I would say..even better!

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  6. S June 21, 2007 at 13:21 Reply

    Smithy
    Very creative as always!

    a few years back I’d be jumping up and down to say and hear those lines and I’d still in poetry and ‘ideal’ life but just that I have been shaken up and told that it doesnt happen this way!

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  7. Alazyguy June 21, 2007 at 18:17 Reply

    I feel a bit out of place, but I can only think of my parents.

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  8. Apoorva June 21, 2007 at 19:41 Reply

    I would say-
    Wrong person. I aint your Dad.

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  9. Apoorva June 21, 2007 at 19:47 Reply

    Ah, and I jes read your comments!
    Alazyguy – we are on the same page

    Rachna: You complete me does not make for a weak line. It just means finding the right person who complements you perfectly well.

    However, its been so often used that saying it definitely makes for a weak level of creativity. 🙂

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  10. Prachee June 21, 2007 at 20:15 Reply

    Everytime I see Tom Cruise say it to Renee Zellwegger, it makes me believe in romance once again.

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  11. wild_horses June 22, 2007 at 00:11 Reply

    well, if its an academic .. you should say..
    you interpellate me..
    or ..
    come, colonise me
    heee heee

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  12. Valhalla June 22, 2007 at 00:47 Reply

    I would stay stick with the three word sentences to keep the romance in and the verbosity out!
    wild_horses: come, colonise me?? heh.. wicked.

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  13. pensivelawyer June 22, 2007 at 09:08 Reply

    I think its absolutely diabetic!…:)

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  14. S June 22, 2007 at 13:36 Reply

    Prachee,
    Yes!!

    Wild-horses,
    Come, colonise me is awesome…

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  15. 'nonnymus June 22, 2007 at 23:15 Reply

    appropriate and honest

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  16. Dreamcatcher June 23, 2007 at 11:30 Reply

    Too sweet?

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  17. Brad June 23, 2007 at 17:04 Reply

    If ‘I started you’ and ‘you complete me’ then we are in perfect harmony, complementing each other in a ‘circle’!

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